Week 5 WINNER 第五周周冠军

This weeks selection is truly frustrating. We had so many good entries! I would LOVE to add another short list one. But …

-Oliver Oettli

Week 5 WINNER 第五周周冠军

4. Submission Title 标题:
Name 姓名:沈杰
Description 描述:摄于2018/4/1苏州怡园

Week 5 第五周
Submission 投稿 & LIKES 点赞:
07/29 00:01 – 08/04 24:00 (GMT+8)

33 submissions / 投稿
2546 views / 浏览人次

The judge’s opinions:
以下是评委们的观点:

1. Submission Title 标题:旅行者
Name 姓名:Kate Wang
LIKES 点赞:85
Description 描述:一直想拍一张表达穿梭世界的照片。这次在匈牙利旅行时,我坐在路边歇脚,看着车水马龙时灵感来了!在又一部Tram开来时,我抓拍了车开走的瞬间,车门上倒映着城市的建筑和蓝天白云。我微笑的面对世界,在世界中穿梭。

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: I’m afraid this selfie of the ‘shuttle world’ means exponentially more to you personally than it does objectively – or in any other way – to anyone else.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 因为是近景/半张脸,所以有较大的视觉冲击力!只是表情还没有到位,细节也未太注重——左肩上有四根带子!

Eleanor Moseman: In an era of digital narcissism, I guess I’m not shocked to see a selfie make it to the highest voted image this week. The frustration is less to the photographer but more to the people that voted for it. Maybe she’s going for the landscape being reflected in the window behind her back. The focus is her, and I can’t see any more reason to this image as a basic selfie. If she had other intent, then there needs to be some effort put forth I’m focusing on the reflection and less on her.

Guyu Syhr 谷雨: 你很美,有人气,又有创作欲望,继续努力!这张顶天立地的自拍,我感受不到你所描述的场景。

2. Submission Title 标题:帕劳的傍晚
Name 姓名:李晨
LIKES 点赞:66

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: Nice colours. Nice place. Decent capture. I like the little roof shape.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 一幅司空见惯了的日出日落图,很漂亮,如果这幅图是在彩色摄影刚发明的头几年拍的,那你就能载入史册了!

Eleanor Moseman: Not a bad landscape shot. The colors are vivid and bold and you can still see some detail in the shadows. Definitely sets a mood and invites a viewer in.

Guyu Syhr 谷雨: 又是一张夕阳照,画面宁静优美,但只是悦目几秒而已。

3. Submission Title 标题:city reflection
Name 姓名:沈杰
LIKES 点赞:63
Description 描述:美丽的西澳珀斯时晴时雨,一阵大雨过后栏杆上的一滩积水倒映出美丽的城市……

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 水面的倒影利用得不错,但记住,拍建筑时,垂直线条一定要拉得非常垂直。

Eleanor Moseman: Sure. Okay. An uninteresting cityscape with an effort using reflections to make it worth looking at. Great time of the day for a photograph but keep playing with the reflection and try different angles.

Guyu Syhr 谷雨: 标准的构图,  变幻的色彩,但缺乏故事,像个什么项目介绍。

4. Submission Title 标题:
Name 姓名:沈杰
LIKES 点赞:45
Description 描述:摄于2018/4/1苏州怡园

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 这张照片对焦或者是景深的控制有点问题,此话如何讲?你要么只有红鲤鱼清楚,或者只有几片枫叶清楚—小景深;要么是全部看到的东西都清楚—大景深。而现在好像是对焦不准或者是手抖动了,或者是对焦对在枫叶上而风吹动枫叶抖掉了,没有一样是很清楚的,从而产生了“抖音”效果,倒也很时尚!

Eleanor Moseman: Zen like. I can imagine this photo in a coffee shop or a waiting room. Very calm and I like the balance in composition. Keeping the background out of focus helps this image. Not bad. One of my favorites this week.

Guyu Syhr 谷雨: 作者有想法,但画面杂乱,没有突出亮点,是鱼还有枫叶?

5. Submission Title 标题:相爱一生
Name 姓名:清风幽水
LIKES 点赞:37
Description 描述:晨练时在公园荷塘边偶遇这个场景,一对正在爱爱的情侣不幸触网,无论怎么挣扎都没有分开,直至最后成为蜘蛛的美餐也相爱不分离!

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: I like that you got in close to capture this (maybe could have gotten closer?), but I’m kind of bothered by the colours in the background which distract too much for me.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 我知道你的想法:自然频道看了那么多,几天终于轮到我了,是不是?然后挽起袖子,就把它拍下来了!这叫看人挑担不吃力,其实拍这种东西有很多原始法则应该遵循的,如:必须是深色背景,清晨的逆光照在带着露珠的蜘蛛网上,蜘蛛刚捕到猎物还未开始享用……,看着

这种照片,中国人的耳边即会响起赵忠祥的声音;而老外的耳边,随之便响起了David Attenbrough 那沙哑而充满了激情的解说声!估计你这张照片人们看了之后不会有这样的反应!

Eleanor Moseman: Get closer and wait for better light. Change position as the background is too distracting and the colors are bad. Work a little more for this and it might be better. Right now it just seems like it was some random shot on a nature walk. Technically, not good.

6. Submission Title 标题:珀斯城
Name 姓名:沈逸凡
LIKES 点赞:36
Description 描述:飞机从西澳珀斯机场起飞后的五分钟

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: We all took this photo. And then posted it on social media with a nice goodbye message. And that was it.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 去年在我们的比赛里,好像有张类似的照片,拍的是密西西比河,好听一点呢,说是异曲同工;而实际上各方面的素质不能跟它比,那我们就叫它东施效颦吧!

Eleanor Moseman: I love what Ioana wrote! Been there, done that, over it. It looks like a landscape of pollution and smog. Makes me hope the airplane keeps going.

7. Submission Title 标题:青花瓷
Name 姓名:蔚蓝
LIKES 点赞:30
Description 描述:素胚勾勒出青花笔锋浓转淡!在徐汇日月光的自动扶梯上,抬头一看,好美的青花瓷瓶啊!在半秒内瞬间拍摄,记录下这美妙的一瞬!

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: Not bad. I like it, the sharpness, composition, reflection, colours, the lighting – they’re all there and work well together.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 此图缺少一个构图必须有的东西,叫做“趣味中心”,如满天星斗、新月、满月,雁阵……

Eleanor Moseman: I like this shot a lot. The color and composition. I imagine the photographer waiting for better light, finding the perfect center point and aiming up. We all know it’s an architectural shot and really not that difficult, but the color, decent exposture, and compostion makes it another favorite this week.

8. Submission Title 标题:《小熊的嘴巴》
Name 姓名:殷宏杰
LIKES 点赞:21
Description 描述:素描教室里的画板和画夹已经陈旧,但学生有火热学习的心。一个特别的角度让我一丝笑容。人要会发现美,享受快乐。这就是人生积极向上的态度。我留着了这一瞬间。

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: I don’t get it.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 本周又多了一张百思不得其解的照片!不能怪作者,只能怪我们主办方的吸引力还不够大,好照片不肯送过来,坏照片满天飞!

Eleanor Moseman: Too much black negative space. Confused on what this is or supposed to be.

9. Submission Title 标题:City Tree
Name 姓名:DM Barlow
LIKES 点赞:17
Description 描述:A solitary tree on a hill above the city of Hong Kong late at night. I took one photograph of the tree and then took 200 photographs of the background and sky and merged them all together. The photographs and editing were all done on my iPad Air 2.

Judge’s opinions 评委观点
Ioana Farcas: Nice. The tree of life. Appreciate the effort. Feels very fine artsy and moody. Keep playing and experimenting with this.

Wang Gangfeng 王刚锋: 这张照片如果是摄于170年前摄影术刚刚发明的年代,那么可以表明你掌握了摄像术,可以荣华富贵!而今天,这只是雕虫小技中的雕虫小技了!

Eleanor Moseman: It’s a cliche but they’re cliches because we all find them visually appealing. Not a terribly fan of filters but I’ll let it go with this one. Without the filter, the negative space would be extremely uninteresting. It’s one of the better choices for this week.

Guyu Syhr 谷雨: 是份艺术作品,看得出作者在玩技术,只是我更喜欢现实主义的瞬间照。